Delicious Dew

Assignments are meant to be late, yeah?:-P Ok, this one’s that of yesterday, with an Elegy form of a poem. With the prompt of flavor, nothing can beat the flavor of nature. So does my poem. Do have a read!:-)
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Delicious Dew

Ever tasted the delicious dew of the morn?
The breeze, the chirps and fawn?

Walks in the park, with sun at horizon
Continuous chatter of the white pigeon

Purified air, greenery everywhere,
How I miss the scenes so rare!

The park now exists no more
My cherished childhood, it bore

That park was much savoured by me
Instead now, there isn’t a tree!

Oh! What has become of humanity,
Destroying, Cutting, Recklessly.

Thank you!

19 thoughts on “Delicious Dew

  1. Good, albeit rhetorical theme. Excellent short poem and composition of thoughts…the way you build up, the concern in end hits the right chord.

    May be sentence ‘4’ continuous chatter…could have sounded bit more poetic…don’t know what though. And, the word ‘instead’ ….

    πŸ™‚ ignore me. Great poetry.

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