A little late, I must confess. But here is today’s assignment, a ballad with an assonance on neighbourhood. This one’s all about today’s festival, in India, the beginning of Navratri. So here’s one to it! I hope you like it!
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Festivitied Neighbourhood
There the stage lits up,
Next to my house
Loud beats of the drums,
And slogans in the name of Devi;
Celebrations in my cup,
Sorrows all dowse.
The girl in red in the middle,
With trident in one hand
And the other painted henna
Meant to give blessings,
The Devi steps out of the puddle,
Of people; onto the stage decorated with sand.
Her white drape, bordered red,
Glimmers, As one of the devils,
All dressed and painted black
Comes running after her with his spear,
In return, she stares, kohl lined, red eyed,
And the devil & his deeds, what she kills.
This was quite a bit about the ongoing Indian festival. A scene at Ahmedabad and Kolkata is a must watch for those wanderers, who wish to visit India. N yes, Happy Navratra to everyone!
Thank you!
I love the vivid imagery you create if the festivities – lovely rhyming too! 🙂 xx
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That’s kind of you to say that. Thank you!:-)
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Sorry – I meant to say ‘of’ not ‘if’ (grr corrective typing) : /
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I loved your poem. It carried across the great space between us and you’ve left me wishing that I had a Navratra to go to. Happy day to you too (but it’s bed time over there!) 🙂
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I’m so glad that it came out so dear to you. Thank you!:-)
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That was really good…The pro’s about being an Indian,experiencing all the beautiful features!!
Really good:)
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Thank you for appreciating!:-)
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🙂 🙂
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Beautifully done!
Happy Navratra.
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Thank you!:-)
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You’re welcome!
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🙂
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Happy Navratta!
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Thank you!:-)
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Dear Lavanya,
Coming from a fellow Indian (albeit a teenager, my heritage is from Maharashtra) living in PA, USA, this is simply phenomenal. I could picture every single scene in my head, and I have to say, you’re a very talented writer. Hope to see you around!
Love,
Aditi
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I’m so touched! I feel really ecstatic as you say this. Thank you soo much!:-)
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You described the scenes beautifully and vividly. I miss India and its vibrancy.
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I’m obliged to stir up your memories. Thank you for the appreciation:-)
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I enjoyed this so much. Thank you for creating and sharing such a lovely, vibrant piece of writing.
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You’re most welcome! I’m glad you liked it! 🙂
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